For Your Hazel Eyes

by Goran Rahim   Sep 3, 2007


I am waiting
For that moment
When you will return
Life before,
You will be my breath
You will be part of me.

I am waiting
For that moment
When you will return
life before,
You will be my angel
You will be my life.

In my dream
You have returned
Me and you
Were together, forever.
When I woke up
I was crying
Crying a lot
I was lonely
For your hazel eyes.

I am thirsty
For your look
Hungry for your smile.
Tell me
When will you return?
Giving me my life back

*** NOT A POEM BUT A PAGE OF MY JOURNAL***

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  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    AWW :'( this is sad but i dont know why at the same time it makes me smile. Well its was nice one. Dast Xosh.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    I Love It!! Amazing!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    I lyke lol relz gud poem 5/5!!!! gud emotiun I lyke it lotz!

    No really, good for you for sharing a page of your journal but it's better as just that. Formatted into a poem form is just not going to work.

    As a journal good emotion
    As a poem needs more imagery

  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Why isn't this a poem?
    Feelings were expressed,
    depth was recognized..
    flow was actually very good.
    Huhm, could be a poem.
    Anyway, this one was very well written.
    The overall meaning was wonderful.
    Good work with this one. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I liked it , It held such deep heartbreaking emotions. Its like you just hand a pen in your hand and it just went to work or something. It was really nice to read...

    5/5 from me..

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