Fight back

by Finalgravedigger   Sep 5, 2007


( this was written long ago not really sure if its good)

Be strong
small one
it wont last long
It hurts to fight
scary at times
but your doing whats right.

The pains for now
you'll make it somehow
you must endure
and make sure.

The time is tough
it'll be rough
but at the end is light
you'll sleep tonight.

No more tears
the fears arent as near
just dont be afraid
becasue either way the end will be great.

( please vote and comment )

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very positive poem, it is interesting and message is great. I like the topic too, meaningful and deep. You expressed emotions excellently, greatly written, well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great work!
    keep it up
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great Poem!

    5.5**
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Irwin

    It sounds like a story youve experienced. I liked it. I could feel it. well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    Its pretty good... easy to grasp... nice write.....

    Crystal....