I Would Not Kiss You

Wow...this poem was so simple and cute..I did love it a lot...
Nice write,keep it up:))5/5

"I would not kiss you
As
Your lips are
So fragile
I don't want to break them"
This is my favorite line.
Dast Xosh, again sweet and simple and short but great.^_^

"I would not kiss you
As
I don't want that taste
To tease me"

i love those lines...excellent metaphor, not wanting the taste...very relatable, great work 5/5

andrew

Awe it was short simple and yet sooo sweet. I loved it and gave it a 5.

Hey,
I think is a beautiful heartfelt poem, its simple and sweet. from the first line I read until the end it was interesting to read,
I think its amazing that you can describe something with so little words. 5/5
kisses stephanie