What You Were Trying To Say

by Goran Rahim   Sep 28, 2007


The way you gazed at me,
Your eyes were telling me something
You wanted to say something
Perhaps
Your heart's feelings
God knows,
If
It was a good one
Or
The opposite.

The way you gazed at me
You gave me mix signals
Love?
Perhaps
But
Not too sure.

My sweetheart
This semester I have failed
My reading class
Therefore,
This time
I could not read your hazel eyes
I want you to
Tell me
What you were trying to say?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Awww Great work, Nice topic you touch in this poem. Taking moments right out of life itself, many could connect to it. Also, It was simple to read and I like that!
    Very Enjoyable write!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dana

    I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Dana

    I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This was simple yet a good poem. actually i loved the last stanza, it made me more interesting and sweet.. keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Listen to your heart and it will let you know exactly what she wants you to know ^_^. dast xosh.

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