Creating Friction.

by Teria   Sep 30, 2007


Creating Friction.

Like final words of wisdom you lie upon my lips,
creating such friction between each of our minds.

With a soulful, deepened kiss I relentlessly pull away,
your fingertips too soft against my palish skin.
With chills down my spine I lose myself in a whirlwind,
continuously regarding each thought from you.
I can't seem to find the answers to questions
that've been asked by you too many times.

What's left but emptiness awaiting by my door?
- - Nothing but emptiness tugging at my heart.

There's nothing I can do but hold you way too close,
and nothing I can finish, it was started too long ago.
I've found it hard to believe that luck has come my way.
And, I can feel your body tremble, embraced within mine.
I can see your eyes wonder into the depths of our love.

Nothing can complete the heart once left broken.
And, like final words of wisdom you lie upon my lips,
creating such friction between each of our minds.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Clever title, great poem

    your servant
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This is a beautiful and peaceful piece.. actually i can't really get the real idea in here.. are there second thoughts in the relationship (is that what are you trying to portray in here?) but this one is really sweet..

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was beautiful, Honestly such a gorgeous piece you have written here. The title caught my interest was unique and different. Your word choice sweet holding such amazing emotions which you portrayed deeply into this poem. From start to finish it kept me interested and I didn't get bored at all. For one of your first non ryhme poem this was outstanding. Well done. Keep on writing I suggest you write more pieces like this as you did a fantastc job. 5/5 ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by halfwaytoinvisible

    Awe. . . this was amazing. the words
    are simply perfect.