I wanna be the one u love

by CODACHROME   Sep 30, 2007


I might not be as pretty as a dove
But I sure can fall in love
I wanna be the one u keep
The one u no is worth every leap

Be it big be it small
Id like u to climb that one wall
I wish u culd find the power to reach tall and true
And find out that I am truly the one for you

I wanna be the one u kiss
The one u say 4eva will u miss
I wanna be the one u cry for
Wen my heart is broken down to the core

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    U did this again, ahh I love this one!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Aww this is really sweet But then again sad.
    I hate how theres always this one person you find your self so into.. but they dont feel the same. Lucky for me the person i love soo dearly loves me back, however sometimes i question the things he says and wounder if the love he feels is real or fake.
    i like this poem alot.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A simple poem but full of hopes and longing.. i like the sweet picture, it's pretty clear that you really like the person so much and hoping that he'll/ she'll love you too. good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it and I think you should have kept going. Some lines seemed a little forced for rhyming otherwise you did a good job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww!
    So sweet but with alot of emotion
    I love it!

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