Tossed aside

by Finalgravedigger   Oct 13, 2007


She shoots another guy
in her trash collection of cries
filled with only shattered hearts
as one just starts.

He's just another that shouts
but his love wont let him out
wrapped and tied down in lies
he watches miserably as others die.

The pain makes them rought
with black flattened hearts
there is no longer a mark of life
just one who ended in strife.

The wailing shrieks
of ultimate pain
are her favorite notes
as all go insane.

Dancing and smiling
to the climax of the song
they slowly die down
as time goes along.

She looks in her collection
as one stands alive
she picks it up
and tosses it aside.

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  • Very wwell done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    This is so tight!
    You're an awesome writer. [:

  • 16 years ago

    by Danni

    I really liked the line

    "The wailing shrieks
    of ultimate pain
    are her favorite notes
    as all go insane."

    it really draws your attention to it.
    thanks for the comment awhile back, it means alot to me!
    lyl~Danni~

  • 16 years ago

    by broken

    I love this poem. its great and i love how it all makes sence and rhymes w/o it being too rhymy...if that makes any sence. lol. but anyway. AWESOME POEM. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah

    I love this one. its very profound. keep it up.

    x