A Response To a Special Poem

by Goran Rahim   Oct 26, 2007


I dream of that day
When you will accept me.
You will hold me tight
Having faith in me.

I will embrace you forever
Taking away all your fear.
I will take you away
Happiness is what we will share.

We will be there for each other,
Living a life without sorrow.
A life based on pure love
More that yesterday, less than tomorrow.

I dream of that day,
When we will enjoy the life.
I dream of that day
When I will have you as my wife.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Again, your titles are so sweet. I really wanted to read this one. Lol. Your flow was almost flawless with another beautiful story. Your love is expressed so purely. Simply beautiful.

    This line is ohemmgee. Amazing. Lol--
    More that yesterday, less than tomorrow

    Almost breathtaking. Again, great job :]]

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Hmm i hope that your dreams will come true, dast xosh it was a great poem. I enjoyed reading it and your other poems as always. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Omg, this is such a beautiful poem. It reminds me of a poem that my fiance wrote to me. I loved it!!!

    Great job!!!

    10/5 <---if that would be possible...

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Oh, I love this poem. I know this feeling so well. The rhyming is a little off, but the song is really good although. Nice work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Awwww so cute! it'll be a great and joyous day. great poem goran, yet again, i'm sure it touched her heart. i loved it!

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