150 Miles

by Goran Rahim   Oct 29, 2007


Tonight
You were away
Almost 150 miles far.
Tonight,
I was waiting
For another morning.
So I could feel the city's breeze
In which
Your breath is mixed.
Tonight
You were far away,
And here
I was alone
Trying to kill the time
With a new poem......

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  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mmm. your poems are just something to relate to. nicely done goran. =] 55

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww something so cute and pure and still so sad. A perfect short poem.
    Amazing job on this one!
    5/5 Keep it up! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Dont you hate it when you are wait for time to come so you can see that one person? My aunt once asked is it better to be blind or to wait for someone to come when they never show up? sometimes the best way to kill time is writing a poem, even when you are at work lol.I liked it and it was short but the message is understood. Dast xosh 5/5 ^_^.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww i know the feeling. cute poem i loved it. i finally have a new one lol, i'm catching back up to you! your poems are always great, keep writing, i love to read them!