Love (Tanka)

by Ingrid   Nov 8, 2007


Like a summer breeze

you gently brush the insides

of my heart and soul

Overwhelming feelings of

deep contentment fulfill me

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  • 15 years ago

    by Raychil

    This is such a deep write. Your poems are so full of love its as if the reader gets a warm sensation of it all their own. I like how you kept your flow and the stanzas were steady. Wonderful.
    <3Raych

  • 16 years ago

    by minh

    Very good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Done, Very Well Penned, Bravo!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Brilliant poem. Words profound and yet filled with romance. I love reading tanka's, which yours was the best. Well-penned 5/5.

    Take care,

    Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chase

    Very short and pretty!! I love the way you connect the gentleness of love to a soft breeze. ^^

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