Bowing To The Wind. (Haiku)

by Steven Beesley   Nov 24, 2007


Bowing To The Wind

See the branches bow
down to the incessant wind,
the leaves join in dance.

Steven Beesley (c) 24th November, 2007

Haiku:
A Japanese verse form of 3 unrhymed lines, containing 5-7-5 syllables respectively.

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  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Steven,

    it's been so long since i read your work. Your genius shines again!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Very much enjoyed this piece.. It was ever so delicate.. an wonderful write... great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Very nice Steve!!!!

    You deserve a 5/5 for this one.

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Steven beautiful Haiku you've penned here.

    See the branches bow
    ^^^
    By using see as your first word .... You have painted such a picture of beauty with just three short lines.
    It makes me want to take a deep breath of fresh air .... and listen to the leaves rustle while they dance....
    Breathtaking !

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    This is an awesome Haiku :) Love the title. Your words paint such a vivid image.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

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