Take Good Care of my HEART!

by Sweet lig   Nov 29, 2007


TAKE GOOD CARE OF MY HEART!
AUTHOR:Sweet lig

I gave you my heart without any doubts
Cause I love you more than you know
And theres no one take your place

You're the only one I needed most
The one I knew your were there for me
When I feel so lost and all alone

I may not be your perfect girl
I may do things wrong
But I'm sincere that you'll always be

God knows these feelings of mine
Sometimes it hurts but I guess its normal
Cause I just love u with all of my heart

I know and I believe this heart of mine
That were never be fallen apart
No matter how and no matter what

But I know life is changing
Like our hearts beating
That we can never control

You love me and I love you too
I cared you as what you do
But please, all I ask to you is to...

Take Good Care of my HEART!

this is from a contest and please tell me what do u think guys..

thanks a lot!

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Very good! i think its really good. emotion is the best thing in this piece as it is very strong!
    Taegan Emily xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    You love me and I love you too
    I cared you as what you do
    But please, all I ask to you is to...

    Take Good Care of my HEART!

    The ending was the strongest part in this poem. The begining is a little weak though. The lack of rhymes and weak flow ruin it a little bit. 4/5 nice work though

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    If it's for a contest i think you just won lol. This poem to me is flawless. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily

    WOW I love it. It was very good and i liked the flow of it also!

  • 16 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    Hey this is a cute read .. i think it is good for a contest cuzz it has originality in style and arrangement ..keep it up