Live Life At Random

Love this one, great poem...
read some of mine, let me know what you think! :)

I loved this piece, it was beautiful. i really enjoyed reading it. yer a wonderful poet, keep up the good work!!

"Scream out your lungs"
thought it sounded better "Scream your lungs out"

Only my opinion though.

I liked this poem, definitely relates to my own life. I hate planning things out, and I enjoy randomness. Shame? What is that?.. lol
Yeah, I don't have much of it.

The title caught my eye, I must admit. Worth the read!.. Keep it up :)

I love this it has a great message which u get across very clearly

These are my favourite style of poems.
Short stanzas+Lines. I write them alot, I liked to try fit so much, into so little.
Let the readers mind tear it apart looking for hidden meaning.
When there is none, But the reader will find some. We always do.

"Lets walk on air
Smile at the pain
Cry for the joy
Lose what we gain"

Reminds me of two songs.
One by the wombats; One by Train.

"Strive for imperfection
Claim all mistakes
Never give up
Do whatever it takes."

Favouritee.

I love simple rhyme.
It creates simple flow, that slips of your tongue.
It's an easy read, and this made me smile.

Well done. :]