Tesselation Patterns Of Todays Youth

This one is really good. Im still trying to understand it completely :s lol. but thats my small brain lol. Although i can sense the emotion in it and its adds to the imagery.
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Taegan Emily

Wow. Unfortunately, my simple brain hasn't quite managed to work out this poem yet. Frustratingly, I'm not sure it ever will properly but my mind lingers on vague ideas and emotions within your words. A really impressive write, with astounding imagery and so much is portrayed in just two stanzas. Another awesome piece.

Sole. x

This is yet another amazing piece! i'm speechless! i absolutely love it. it's. .dark. it's sad, and the vocabulary was simply outstanding and very well used. your word choice was very advanced, far moer advanced than my own. [considering. .my vocab isn't too big. lol] the imagery was. .spectacular! and the emotions were very nicely captured. another outstandingly amazingly wonderful poem! lol. 5/5.

You have real potential sometimes almost all the time i feel the same

Wow!
Amazing work, so unqiue and creative! Well done, Mel I admire your writing, it is so impressing and your ideas for poems are outstanding. This one puts me in awe and it posses it's own brilliant atmosphere, imagery that you created in whole piece is also beautiful. I really enjoy in your poetry and every line of this is breath-taking... Every word it is perfectly chosen and I can't describe how much I like this. It is simply beautiful like the rest of your poems...