"Yaddaddafeelmean?!"

HEY GUYS, THIS IS MY FIRST POEM I'VE POSTED EVER. REALLY NEED SOME INPUT, CHECK IT OUT?

SAY YOU HATE ME SAY YOU DONT CARE SAY YOU FORGOT ME YOU AINT GETTIN ANYWHERE SAY IMA B!T*H AND I DONT HAVE A LIFE ALL I GOT TO SAY IS BABIBOI YOU NEED TO SET YA MIND RIGHT

'life at times may seem shit, but it gets even worse when you walk in it'

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Vite...Vite...F.U.C.K.I.N.G...Vite

Spark if or park it

Blades whisper a cutting plea of release
and bullets cry of red tears.

At first what you thought was love is really not for boys are just like Handicapped parking spaces. All the good spot's are taken, and the other one's are just to far!

U ask ask people
they said no
ur going 2 be tick
if u r a gurl don't have a b**ch fit