Garden of Eden. (Kyrielle)

by Steven Beesley

Dawn's most quiet and precious hours
Come with the fresh scent of flowers
In colorful warm and rich hues
Spectacular and wondrous views

Soothing fresh dew make pastures lush
This garden of Eden so very plush
Into your heart does peace infuse
Spectacular and wondrous views

The air filled with such sweet scents
Daily occurrences of such extraordinary events
Nature's facets do really amuse
Spectacular and wondrous views

Natural wonders we see far and wide
We must conserve, we must take pride
Gifts from God we should not abuse
Spectacular and wondrous views


Kyrielle:
French poetry form, it has a refrain - the final line of each stanza is the same. 4 lined stanzas with a rhyming pattern of aabB. A rhyme pattern of abaB may also be used if desired.

 

Submission date : 2005-08-26

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leif Estenson at 2005-10-24

Hey very good poem. I'm just getting into poetry and i have a poem up on my profile called "Once I'm Gone I'm Gone" so far i only have one vote of a 5 but im entering it into a state contest through my highschool english teacher. It's an easy read so please rate it fairly and comment on it thanks. I liked this poem though i will have to try and use that format.


Chasity at 2005-10-25

This poem was excellent!!!!

David Wallace ( F P C ) at 2005-10-27

I love the way u write the poem it was unique. u just gave me inspiration to write a poem in this form. keep up the good work

Neo ( F P C ) at 2005-11-26

Nice poem Mr.Beesley..keep it up..hope to read more.
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especially this one was kool

Neo

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-14

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

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Wallace



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