Submission date : 2005-08-26
Hey very good poem. I'm just getting into poetry and i have a poem up on my profile called "Once I'm Gone I'm Gone" so far i only have one vote of a 5 but im entering it into a state contest through my highschool english teacher. It's an easy read so please rate it fairly and comment on it thanks. I liked this poem though i will have to try and use that format.
This poem was excellent!!!!
David Wallace ( F P C )
I love the way u write the poem it was unique. u just gave me inspiration to write a poem in this form. keep up the good work
Neo ( F P C )
Nice poem Mr.Beesley..keep it up..hope to read more.
Just keep on searchin for ur poem everyday..
especially this one was kool
Wallace ( F P C D )
Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.