Relieve Awaits

by Meena Krish   Nov 8, 2008


Will it dissipate this heavy cloud that looms with angry eyes
from the chains of suffocation will she break free and rise,
each day lulls to the music of emptiness that holds the reigns
within the walls of silence a familiar cry always seem to rain.

Feelings vibrate wanting to be discovered yet remains invisible
understanding, blindly caught and left to float away in a bubble
years know no forgiveness as it furiously lashes out the past
in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last.

If only the wand of time is in her hands to undo this bitter reality
maybe another path of joy and freedom will become her true destiny,
the spirit to defeat each battle and see that glimpse of light just fades
mind moves closer to the steps where relieve awaits like a shining blade.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An excellently written piece, Meena.
    "Years know no forgiveness as it furiously lashes out the past in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last." A dark and engrossing poem and I particularly loved that line.
    All the best Meena,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is excellent and very well written. I could not decide which line meant the most to me.

    These three make profound statements:
    "in the dungeon of misery her soul fights smiling, it will not last."

    "If only the wand of time is in her hands to undo this bitter reality
    maybe another path of joy and freedom will become her true destiny,".

    It is as if you have stepped into my mind and read my thoughts.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very strong and captivating piece of writing. Good structure and good expression of thoughts. Enjoyable!

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert

    WELCOME BACK MY DEAR!!!!

    It took me some time to catch up to you but just read this piece I am happy to see you ave not lost your touch or need to write its been some time. Please get back to me and tell me whats going on with you have alot of time to catch up on. I have wrote a few pieces but I guess I will have to get back to the grind myself. Takle care and hope to hear from you soon. Your Fellow poet and friend Robert....

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I enjoyed this poem. I had to read it a few times before I actually seemed to understand it.

    I really enjoyed the poem and felt that it was one of the really good expressions that you have released in a while.

    I'm thinking it was very enjoyable.

    5/5