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by Melissa Feb 9, 2016
Oh your cryptic lines play words
like a carnival game;
I'm the bull's eye
you're the dart fluttering by,
never kissing its target
and the prize
is always an opportunity
for a bigger prize
I want to be a gypsy
dishing fateful omens at passersby,
or better yet, the queen of cups
resting in your hand
but I'm merely a girl,
with a cotton candy tongue,
words playing like a carousel
around and around and around
by Maple Tree
There is such a large variety of wording that is so fun and detailed that I had to highlight this piece.
The structure within the formatting also allows the reader to have fun reading this piece.
I felt like I was at a carnival and I do believe that was meant to be the metaphor and the message within the lines is very powerful..
Melissa has a true gift for pouring out her feelings within descriptive detail and metaphors!! Just wonderful
This is a nice one - I like.
Congrats on the win. Glad I nominated.
this deserved to win.
by Ben Pickard
Lovely to see this on the front page this week. Congratulations and all the best,