The Soundtrack Of My Life by Kitty Cat Lady points 7
Usually I'm not one for long pieces because I seem to go off track when reading them but this one was just right in length especially at it kept an unforced rhyming throughout and the message that this gave out was a strong one, one that we could all take heed of because it's inspirational and though this lady has had obstacles to overcome she's done it with sheer strength. I take my hat off to you for an inspirational yet raw fluent write and wish you all the best.
"The Sound Track Of My Life" By Kitty Cat Lady 4 points
I choose this as one of my favorite 3 this week because it shows the endurance, the spirit and the will of humanity to overcome.
What some will see as a barrier others see as a challenge to be overcome. The author quite clearly has done this and has shared the story of such. The explanation behind the poem is something of a bonus.
The rhyming in this poem is excellent but I think the addition of a word here or there would have helped it flow a little easier, although it still works rather well.
Thank you for giving us an insight to your world and I hope the boffins create even better devices for you.
Ah Craig! It's great to know the name behind the judge's comment at last! Thanks so much ... it really meant a lot to me to win with this poem and I'm really grateful for your part in it :-) xx
1 month ago
by Robin Carretti
Just so amazing I love your creative heartful writing