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by Sherry Caayupan Sep 26, 2017
Love, romance /
A chain through the hollow moon in endless nights,
Without a wink, I see darkness engulfing,
Guilty pleasures bloom as sparks fly,
Wide open arms savoring bliss entwining...
A warmth of boundless faith and passion,
Lovers longing for their loving presence,
Time stood still in this couple's union,
No wasted tears or endearment stolen...
A blessed patronage of this love's fruits,
Like a pot of gold at the end of every rainbow,
The pouring rain stays serene, it can't undo,
This star-crossed lovers' truthful row...
A guiding light shines through the gate,
Of this love's starting pace,
Love have found a lasting slate,
As a strong and binding space...
by Milly Hayward
A well deserved nomination with beautiful visuals and agree with Ben the rhymes and half rhymes work brilliantly. Milly x
by Sherry Caayupan
Thanx! I really appreciate it! ;)
by (we & why)
Full of wonders. I loved 3rd stanza the most
Thanx! It was inspirational... :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
Beautiful imagery Sherry ... a lovely read :-)
Thanx, Kitty! Hope you enjoyed reading this! :)
by Ben Pickard
This is very good. The rhymes and clever half rhymes have not suffocated the rich imagery in any way which isn't always easy to achieve. Well done.
All the very best,
Thank you, ben! I loved writing this one! :)