Deceit

by Kitty Cat Lady   Mar 14, 2018


I've been creeping round now for some time
I'm sorry that I lied
I didn't want you to find out
The extent I've had to hide

I know you've noticed me acting odd
Speaking in whispers on the phone
And at times I've seemed quite flustered
When you have arrived home

Yes you are the last to know
All your friends heard before you
I begged them not to spill it
It would have spoiled it if you knew

So now you know the whole truth
And I'm laughing loud and hearty
I really hope that you enjoy
Your special surprise party!

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  • 6 years ago

    by Walter

    Ha, maybe you should have titled this poem relief which is how you made me feel when I reached the end! Great twist!

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha, where's the fun in that Walter? Lol. Thanks so much :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oooh I like how it goes from seeming as though someone is having an affair then bam that ending, well played :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Miss Kitty! You had me going there lol...well done-

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha, love it! Thanks lovely Brenda :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    You totally nailed me with this ond.

    I was thinking of me some ill deed and then you drop the punchline in the last stanza

    Fantastic rhyming throughout and throughly enjoyable

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha ... so glad you liked it Craig and thanks so much for nominating it, how lovely! :-) xx
      =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Well that didn’t end where I thought it would - clever x

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