SHE DOES NOT CARE

by Goran Rahim   Jul 28, 2006


Not too far
Not too close
Any hope?
No one knows.

Not too far
Not too near
Should I tell her?
Still some fear.

Not too far
Not too close
Like the rain
Come and goes.

Not too far
Not too near,
I told her
She doesn't care.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Nice. short and good. it flowed nicely. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwww...thts soo sad..

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    I like how simple it is easy but still makes sense love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This was a good poem, and well written. I got it but I didn't not sure if that makes sense. I loved the flow, and structure and creativity of it though.

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Short sweet and to the point while describing everything i loved it keep it up! =D

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