This love

by Cella Bella   Feb 2, 2007


This love,

Clouding my judgment
Caressing my fears
Holding me tightly
Suppressing my tears

This love, could it be true?

For every night I lay beside,
My Romeo, my knight
How I wonder, as he sleeps,
With obscure disbelief

This love, will it end?

Was every word
And every touch
And every kiss
Just pretend?

This love, his love, could it be,

Absolute,
Or just lechery?

... I cut the end off of this, I didn't like it too much. I might add to it one day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by cassanova

    Different style short and to the point check out some of my featured poems . i just got on from being gone for awhile i have wrot like four poems in the past 24hr but i loved your poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece, you express a lot in this beautiful poem, keep up the good work.

    This love, his love... could it be
    ^^ Great line.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    Nice style, simple and sweet.
    Very deep, very powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Incredible . It used a lot of common vocabulary and some common rhymes used on this site, but I loved your word choice . Like :

    This love, his love... could it be

    Absolute,
    Or just lechery?
    `Gorgeous, darling .
    Wonderfully written . It's simple, yet so big .

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    So very true!
    I bet me anda bunch of other ppl can relate to this poem. It is very heart felt good job!!!

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