You Have One New Message

by Goran Rahim   Jun 7, 2007


I click,
Again and again.
I click
To see a note that say
"You have one new message"
Because my heart knows
That message is a smile
From 300 miles faraway
That brights my dark room.

I click,
Before I sleep
I click
When I wake up
For a message that says
"You have one new message"
Because
My heart knows
That message is
From a blossom flower

I click,
Because now
That click is
My happiness
It is the only cure
For my sadness

Baby,
Please
I'm clicking again,
Don't disappoint me,
I want it to say
"You have one new message"

Dedicated to {Samantha}

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  • 10 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    I loved this poem it made me smile.. btw you love writing about smiles dont you lol. very adorable. a little grammar errors but understandable. The title captured my attention right away. Unique titles are the key to getting a readers attention. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    That's so sweet, but so sad...4/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, this is truely unique. I can relate to this so much. We all crave something like this, and this poem is really honest in that way. It's amazing how someone so far away can keep us happy. I enjoyed this for the concept of it, the flow and repetitive words were very effective. An excellent write. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by AmY

    Awww how cuteeee. thats the same thing i'm going through....cool 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww. i liked this poem goran. the only error is the word bright in the first stanza. use brightens instead.

    =]