Sometime the things we dream about the most, are the things our heart fears most..

~Me~

I just put up a couple poems and i would like some comments, if you please!!!!
thanks,
Sirena

I dream in darkness,
I sleep to die.
Erase the silence,
erase my life.
Our burning ashes,
blacken the day.
A world of nothingness,
Blow me away.

-Evanescence

"Bring back the pain again" -- Scars on Broadway

She's not all that great,
you're heart's gonna break.
she'll be your biggest mistake,
that girl's so fake.

At the end its just having a never ending war with yourself and people around you is just the plubic who likes the view

!~and so it comes down with a blade to my wrist!~

The stars weep tonight.
as th sun kills them.
The Sky turns red with their blood
the sun will not share the sky.
for this i will alway despise

The blood of my life slowly slips away,
I dont want to see a new day,
So I'll let it all drip down,
and let the soil take it.

What my face doesn't conceal, my sleeves will.