My head cant get by

by Finalgravedigger   Apr 11, 2008


This shrouded mind covered in complex philosphies
is always on the move wondering of today's society
questions and answers fly here and there
but within your proescence my thoughts stare.

I come to a halt and feel something weird inside
my head cant think and all thoughts subside
Emotions take over and my feelings are in control
my spririt feels as though its climbed out of a dark hole.

The light is shining and my strength shrinks away
however these bright soft feelings tells me its okay
It seems that my morals and thoughts lay with my heart
on a comfy pillow that was once torn apart.

All of them rest sound asleep on this bed you provide
Its like as though Im an innocent child at my mothers side
My mind maybe tainted by my soul is in the blue sky
its because of you Im able to fly.

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  • 17 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Wow... i feel this is one of the best poems i ve ever cme across!!! beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bugg

    That was a really amazing read, my friend. The only thing I have to comment on is your spelling and punctuation. Just look back over it and fix those few mistakes and you'll have the best love poem ever! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Lovely

    Wow that is amazing! It has so much emotion!
    Great Job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    "The light is shining and my strength shrinks away
    however these bright soft feelings tells me its okay
    It seems that my morals and thoughts lay with my heart
    on a comfy pillow that was once torn apart."

    i love all of it but the above part has to be my fave stanza, i just love the descriptivness of the words you have chosen and the openness of the feelings.

    i really like this one!!

    well done

    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects the ecstasy of being in love as only a few poets could

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