I saw you in my dreams (Mirror Nonet)

by Ingrid   Jun 17, 2008


I saw you in my dreams, from afar
In the soft early morning light
you came to me, arms outstretched
Halo surrounding you
adorning your face
a smile so bright
my hero
my love
you
You
my love
my hero
a smile so bright
adorning your face
Halo surrounding you
You came to me, arms outstretched
In the soft early morning light
I saw you in my dreams, from afar

A Mirror Nonet starts with a 9 syllable line, then 8 syllables until you are down to 1 and then back to 2 and so on until you end up with a 9 syllable line again.
It needs to be mirrored, but not within the line itself also, like in a Palindrome. The poem does not have to rhyme.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Softly Beautiful and Wonderful Write, Great Job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very sweet, and unique! It flows so well, and I always learn something new whilst reading your poems. Beautiful write, 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Ingred, Somehow between the highly intelectual concepts of your writing and the depths of your heart from which your poetry flows so freely, I always seem to be left somewhere in between unable to create a comment befitting the beauty of your expressions in verse . 5/5 ---JIM

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Interesting, but kind of lazy, lol jk. just messing with you. good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Wow.
    It was veryy good.I am really impressed.I hope i could write such thing.You are really Creative,it seems you have very strong emotions.Really i dont have words to praise what i have read and juddged you from your writing.It is really verry good.
    I am submitting my poems in this forrum and i need people like you to read them,give me suggestions and corrections,so that i can also improve my abilities.It will be very nice of you,if you please take out some time and read my few submitted poems.I would love to hear some possitive criticism from your side.
    Love
    Junaid

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