Keep on holding

by Lonely Rider   Jun 24, 2008


Keep on holding

The sun may be eclipsed
And the darkness blinding
The cliff may be steep
But dear,keep on holding

Stabilize shaking faith
Let the thorns prick
But never succumb to
Failure's nasty trick

Let your courage speak
Patiently solve the riddles
Light is awaiting
At the end of darkest tunnel

Firmly stand on ground
With your head held high
Rays of hope will reveal
That success is nearby.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    I really liked your poem. It has a good messege. Very well written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very positive message. Well done LR

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is such a good poem.. very inspiring.. after reading it .. it kinda made me more confident. i like this one. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet escape

    This is a nice poem that my inspire some to take a deeper look into life...love the way it flowed and the words used.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Very good poem. I think you could've taken it a little farther actually.
    The flow was a little off. But it made sense and had a great message. good job!

    4/5

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