Voices

This is good poem...i liked it...

This poem makes me sad :[

Ok this si creepy feelings , frist i dont know who are these vouices , but i assure you at least we care if you do it , so dont !!
second , if i had these voices i would own a gun and shoot them if they open their mouth again,
i used to have them and i shoot the dam things and rest all my life,
as a poem it si good ,
need structrue and rhyming but as expression we get waht you want to say !!
so fix it when those voices stop

Wow Hailey!
I can relate i've heard so many voices and people just said its all in my head...
great poem good work