LONELY GIRL

by Emilia   Jun 3, 2004


I'm a lonely girl
I'm so lonely without you
I tried to make you stay
well, now it doesn't matter anyway
I know that you don't love me anymore.
When you said the things you said, I'm sure..
Now all I can do is cry
In my head the question remains, why?

I can't sleep at night
You can't see, that you mean everything to me.
Without you I'm nothing
Without you, I won't last
I can't believe that you will be in my past..

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  • I definately know how you feel in this poem...I would die if I had to live without the man I love...anyways I gotta jet the bell just rang for 5th period....keep up the good work Much Love JJ

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    good job, i felt the same way about my bf when we broke up but we're back 2gether now, well newayz good job, keep writting, i hope to read more of ur work

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    it was a good poem, but the topic is used so much that i would have liked to have seen some kind of original flair. i know you can do that, ive read some of your other stuff. peacee

  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    I thought that the overall meaning was very well expressed but i think that sometimes poems are best when they are not completely to the point. The poem itself was written wonderfully and flowed very well.

    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Vanessa

    hey thx 4 reading my poems! I think this is one of my fav. poems that u have writtin! It's emotional and i hope to checkout any new poems u write
    thx agian