Have You Ever Noticed*

by lost in lovee   Jul 31, 2008


Have you ever noticed,
There's always that one guy,
Who hurts you so much,
To the point it makes you cry.

Yet you go back,
Every single time,
Because you really love him,
Is what your telling yourself in your mind.

Thoughts of ending everything,
Of coarse they have occured,
Yet you can't bring yourself to do it,
To him you won't say a word.

But as the days go on,
It's getting harder and harder to stay,
Your crying yourself to sleep at night,
Hoping tomorrow will be better than today.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mello193

    Astonishing very good, liked it very much

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Simple and emotional again. I really love the way you write. This poem was very effective. The flow was good, word choice was decent, and I love the concept.

    I'm looking forward to reading more from you. You have such potential as a writer. Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Fantasy

    I absolutely think this poem is adorable!!

    It brings back so many memories, some good, some bad, and thats ok. I love this one!

    Dollface.