Loneliness

by Annaam   Aug 3, 2008


The silence so deep,
It threatens to kill.
The pain so sharp,
It shatters the heart.

Lost in a world of mindful delusion,
Time passes by as I sit in a corner,
Trying to pull myself back,
Trying to hold onto a happy memory.

Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
Once mirrored by long lost tears.

There is darkness all around,
But within the broken heart,
Is alight a glimmer of hope,
Strengthening me...

Teaching me to live again, to love again...
Reminding me of my true love,
Waiting,
To be found one day.

And to prove to me,
That I am not alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    One of your best poems. LOVE IT!! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jad

    Good job again. The flow though wasn't the best but it wasn't bad. The imagery was good and the emotion was outstanding once again. Great job. The poem was really good honestly .

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I definitely like this poem more. You were more creative and used better words. I definitly got a picture in my mind while I was reading it.

    Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
    Once mirrored by long lost tears.
    -- I really loved those two lines.

    Great job.

    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus

    Great poem. The imagery was good

    Empty eyes reflect the sadness,
    Once mirrored by long lost tears.

    I love these lines they are so powerful
    great write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Cause ur not alone. everything willl be ok. loneliness only can last soo long and then ull fins someone

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