Why?

Umm.. I like questions in poems, but I think you over did it just a little... There were just too many whys. I didn't really get that much emotion.. try to write from your heart, not your head, and you'll be fine. :]

Keep writing.

Cayce

The answers will come. maybe not now but soon.

I reali liked this poem.
i dont know what about it i liked so much.

its well written, and expresses how you feel reali well.

perhaps to many whys but still good
4/5

Indeed many question rise from this poem.
The way you wrote it showed that you're really feeling lost inside the madness. There weren't any rhymes, but here it would indeed ruine the flow you built. The words could be better, and I still think the language is too simple for this kind of subject.
Nice work though 4/5

Wow. Excellent write. I really enjoyed this piece because I loved the word choice. lol that is the one thing that popped out at me the most. 5/5