Devil's supplication

by Goth marionette   Aug 21, 2008


The final debate:

The Devil
It's time to supplicate.
Falling forever can't be my fate.
I'm the real master of greed and hate,
But I won't let hell be my mate.
So God let's start our debate.

Seduction is my favorite game,
Because people's belief is so lame
In my world, Faith is a shame,
When desire is too hard to tame
As pleasure is called by my name.

They just live to disobey you,
Thinking they do what they want to,
But they make my wishes come true.
And when death is near, I become their foe.
They exploit me then resort to a useless rue.

Now Regret is valueless, it's the law.
And there in hell, days are too slow.
Skins melting and all over again They grow.
Heaven shall burn, so my pride reaches its glow
Sins aren't forgiven and here is the end of the show

God!! I cry and bow to u to forgive me
Let me cross the line and set me free,
Don't make me drown in that evil spree
And let the paradise be my new destiny
Not like what was supposed to be

God
Forgiveness is a gate to my mercy,
And worshipers repentance is the key
As I'm always there when they pray me
But you'll be forsaken till the end of eternity.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    Loved and enjoyed. Interesting words but it makes it work in this piece. Dark and emotional.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

  • 15 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Oops, was it Rob, or Will Blake?? I can't believe I've forgotten. I... can no longer call myself a Poet.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    It reminds me very much of Robert Blake, and his recurring themes of Darkness not necessarily being Evil; of Sin not always being Wrong; in a world abandoned by God.
    Heh, it's like you've captured what was going through the Devil's mind, in the days before he took over the reins.
    Well written and compelling.
    Matt

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow i am absolutely in love with your style of writing, your poems are like a drug to me. no one else could ever write like you, you have got such a beautiful and unique style. your poems are always so powerful and just leave me speechless. a truly amazing poem yet again by you, great job!!!!! wish i could give you more than a 5

  • 15 years ago

    by adriaan

    I can truthfully say I enjoyed reading this. Interesting rhyming scheme as well, keep it up. :)