Broken identity

by Goth marionette   Sep 3, 2008


Familiar faces,
Greed is their name.
Deadly mistakes;
In the light, in the dark,
But minds in deviation.

Other living idiots,
With distorted aspects,
Seek Ethics, Virtues,
And dreams with no destination.

Strict rules are applied,
When you belong to a thread of air.
Here, Injustice ain't a shame,
As it makes all the dumb same!

Beliefs were lost in the crowd,
And ambitions were kept by discrimination,
While shaded thoughts were left hidden
On papers of broken identity.

In that heartless world,
That is painted by blood,
Where Transients seek eternity,
The light can no more undress their impurity.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    This is deep....Heavily loaded with meaning. Good job for this!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 10 years ago

    by Sidney C

    Nice wording :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Deven

    This was a well written peace i liked it alot^.^

  • 10 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow Goth...This poem is really beautiful and so touching too.I truely loved it.And the title really suits me, it should has been my name.

    Excellent.5\5..

  • 10 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Impressive....... i had a gd read. worth reading.
    another amazing poem frm u.

    (Other living idiots,
    With distorted aspects,
    Seek Ethics, Virtues,
    And dreams with no destination.)

    these are the line that i like.
    overall i like it frm the start till the end
    i enjoy it.
    once again good job.....
    do write more. =)