Brutal beauty

by Goth marionette   Oct 23, 2008


Put me on the ground,
Suck the cold blood from my knees,
Poison the sweetness of my heart.
Anyway I am licked by your dark sins.

Brutal beauty shatters the daylight,
Corpses of hell shall someday rise
In that street of oblivion and fear
Under your control, I seek agonize.

Pain still waves within my neck,
Waiting for my throat's suffocation
I am near the doors of heaven
Though I got neither mercy nor salvation

The falling of utopia isn't fake,
Since I drowned in black fires,
In nothingness where I move alone,
I don't hear but bleeding cries.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Nice dark write......

  • 10 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow I have to say I agree with Nema, I loved those lines the most! Your poem was very Strong..I was happy to see you wrote a new one. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ezra

    Dude you are so good at wrighting! i'm no so good >.>(more like i suke at it but hay)

  • 10 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Sounds like hell. Black fire, is the hottest flame there is. and i see hell.

  • 10 years ago

    by Candice

    Such strong emotions! I have a thing for dark poetry and this one was a really good read short but powerful verses.
    Very Well done.
    Candice