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by Goth marionette Oct 23, 2008
Dark, fantasy /
Put me on the ground,
Suck the cold blood from my knees,
Poison the sweetness of my heart.
Anyway I am licked by your dark sins.
Brutal beauty shatters the daylight,
Corpses of hell shall someday rise
In that street of oblivion and fear
Under your control, I seek agonize.
Pain still waves within my neck,
Waiting for my throat's suffocation
I am near the doors of heaven
Though I got neither mercy nor salvation
The falling of utopia isn't fake,
Since I drowned in black fires,
In nothingness where I move alone,
I don't hear but bleeding cries.
by Prasad B
Nice dark write......
Wow I have to say I agree with Nema, I loved those lines the most! Your poem was very Strong..I was happy to see you wrote a new one. 5/5
Dude you are so good at wrighting! i'm no so good >.>(more like i suke at it but hay)
Sounds like hell. Black fire, is the hottest flame there is. and i see hell.
Such strong emotions! I have a thing for dark poetry and this one was a really good read short but powerful verses.
Very Well done.