I shouldn't miss you

by Goth marionette   Aug 30, 2008


There is no air to breathe
As if I've got a thorn in my throat
I'm left with so much pain inside
And death flies within my soul

When my shadow disappears,
Remember that you were my mistake.
Now I hate nothing but my heart,
It has a broken halo around its beats

My reflection antagonizes me,
I cannot see the real me anymore.
And you simply come to say
"Can I call you my love again?"

I can't be with you once more
Because it can't return what I've lost
I'm just tortured as deep within me knows
That I miss someone whom I shouldn't miss

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 8 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Very touching, so many emotions erupted like a volcano in this piece. Loving but at the same time so sad. To be with someone but no longer want to be.

    I wish my poems matched up to how yours are. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    I really really liked this.
    You use such beautiful words to create a picture in the persons mind when you write.

  • 10 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    I know exactley how you feel, one of my exes, we broke up three different times in the past two yeard and now he like sme again....idk what to do.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nee

    Amazing...
    This poem so reminded me of myself, and the pain I'm going through ..
    Girl you've just astonished me with this sad/love piece.
    I love the last line the most, missing someone you shouldn't miss just....sucks !!!

    And an unrhymed poem??, WoW I seriously thought it rhymed at first, but now I realize your internal music is just as awesome as your external music with the rhymed ones =]]

    love it sweetie and love you even more <3
    write on xx

  • 10 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very good i love it

    you are an amazing poet