This is awesome! I wasn't sure exactly what the colors were representing until the 5th stanza, which is great, because it kept me enthralled and curious. (: Form, cadence, everything was great. I haven't read a piece quite like this before, it was very refreshing. Keep them coming!
This was a rather unique piece as I haven't read one similar to it before, so points for that. I like how in a way it relates to everybody as we all procrastinate and tell ourselves we'll do things and then keep pushing them aside. Overall it was a good poem and it had good flow and word choice...5/5 GG23