My heart is bleeding Tears

by Finalgravedigger   Nov 14, 2008


"My Heart is Bleeding Tears."

Pain echos and thumps through this wrenching body
As every beat and second screams for some body,
Throbs and protrusions cause occasional squeals,
While bending over in agony, gasping as one kneels.

Veins become black as beats slowly tear apart
chaotic sounds rupture through the dysfunctional heart,
Suffocation's vines thrives as blood no longer pumps
Delusions enter the mind causing mutational lumps.

The Heart not capable of holding rich vitality
Oozes and cries blood while being beaten by reality,
Tears of red pour through coursed hearts
Streaming out of our heads as meaningless lives part.

The four chambers of love only leak blood
Overwhelming the body with sorrows flood,
As tears dry up and turn flaky brown
Others cry their pools and eventually drown.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Malachi

    Aww how cute^^ That was amazing! You have a great way with words, nice job! Thanks for also reading me work :3 Means a lot!

    Demi!~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I like the title of this poem it made me feel interest for reading it.. and its nice piece 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Im increadably sorry for the delay

    Your rhyme scheme through out your poem wavers a bit. It goes from rhyme to proes. Just thought that I would point that out. It nota bad thing I was just wondering if you had done it on porpous. The imadgry was good while reading this poem i could get a clear image of what you were talking about.

    My favorite lines were:
    The four chambers of love only leak blood
    Overwhelming the body with sorrows flood

    You have such strong emotions in these lines.

    Well Written
    Darkcrystalbtrfy

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Wow, This was so deep and touching truely beautiful. Also, nice vocabulary and you have amazing imagery.
    I specialy loved this line:
    "As tears dry up and turn flaky brown"

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vox

    Very well done. You have my praise. Only one thing stuck out to me, and that was in the first stanza you rhymed body with body it threw it off a bit but not enough to earn you a 4

    5/5

    Vaughn

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