Soaring Away

Another very nice write. I think you missed the rhyme lines 9&10 and the metre is off. Remember metre is what makes our words poetry rather then prose.

Im lost for words, you just....caught me offguard... your words injected into me captured in whole, flowing along in simmering to boil, peaked perfectly, well done sincerely, great effort inner. *claps*

Indeed an impecable write!
whow, what a beauty, no fillers anywhere just pure poetry!
Bravo, girl!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I really enjoyed this poem. I do find however, as I do in almost every poem, you need more punctuation (or less in some cases). I know a lot of people don't like punctuation in poetry, which I do understand. But, punctuation is the ONLY thing in a poem that has to be essay like. And, the reason of that is when you read an essay you pause at punctuation marks, they're known as end points and such. You need that in poetry too. It's what (usually) gives the emphasis to drama and lingering feelings the oomph they need, along with helping the flow to be perfect. It's just needed.

Other than that, a wonderful poem.

This poem is beatifully written with gret imagery and reflects the talent of the author