Dancing butterflies

by Ingrid   Feb 26, 2009


Dancing butterflies

In the middle of the forest all insects had gathered
From their place upon the leaves they watched the show
Two beautiful butterflies with wings of green, blue and gold
In the circle of light making summersaults, high and low

How enchanting this dazzling dance of love and passion was
Spectators gazing with mouths ajar in silent amazement
As the rays of the sun reflected upon their golden wings
So in love were they, hearts filled with blissful contentment

Bees hummed and flies were buzzing; Gods choir joining in
Leaves rustled and the sweet scent of summer filled the air
The night moths in their dull cloth of brown envied them
As they fluttered and twirled in their colorful hues so fair

Then, in the blink of an eye a sudden violent storm came
Blew all insects from their place and panic entered the scene
Holding on to the branches and hiding wherever they could
They waited this storm out, the likes of which they had never seen

At last all went quiet and they gathered in the open space
Counting heads until they knew for certain one was missing
It was the little butterfly with his blue and golden wings
His lady broke down in tears unable to stop weeping

With her little head sunk to her chest she flew up high into the air,
where the scorching rays of the sun ended the life of this lady fair

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    How sad, but a truly delightful poem Ingrid.
    I loved this story that you penned, kept me reading onwards right up to the end.
    A portrayal of love, damned at the end by the storm.
    A well written piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I love nature poems like this. Giving an unusual life to something you'd never imagine would be doing those things.
    The pictures you paint are... brilliant and just... dazzling.
    And I love rhyming poems.
    I also enjoy the happiness turned to chaos turned to sadness then death. It's an interesting turn of events and just... delightful.

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    Ingrid, you have an awesome ability to take any subjesct and turning it into something beautiful and charming.
    This one is no exception.It was superbly penned and a definite joy to read.Loved it my friend.Keep up the great work.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Beautifully Penned, Exquisite in Evwry Word, A Most Charming Read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sad ending! The piece is full of vivid, picture painting imagery. Good word choice. I do love the nature poems as I am anxiously awaiting spring! Nicely done.