Convergence

by Krathia   Mar 14, 2009


A seraph, perched
Atop an opaline moon
Honey tears bleed from crystalline eyes,
Falling; tumbling stardust
To nocturne zephyrs; insubstantial.
Darkness is no stranger
Nor secret here; cryptic truths rest
Behind the reflection (quivering)
Of dissolved memories.

Trail of saffron scintillas
Disintegrating into amber snowdrops;
Star-kissed notes, trickling
To meet the night.

----------When an angel cries...

Aurous veils, glimmering,
Windblown from eastern skies
Liquid sound spirals in a golden chalice,
Falling; tumbling star-song
To nebulous landscapes; ethereal.
Magic is no stranger
Nor secret here; hidden hopes sing
Within the warmth (trembling)
Of melted fantasies.

River of golden dreams
Cascading into brilliant light;
Sun-kissed hearts, rising
To meet the dawn.

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  • 14 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow. I think that's about all I can say. That was just so amazing. Your word choice was brilliant. Imagry.. was incredible. They only part that bothered me at all was that it didn't flow.. and I just have a thing for poems that flow. But nevertheless it was fantastic.

    Cayce

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole

    Nice job

  • 15 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    It was an alright poem, but it did not seem to special to me. It lacked something I could not quite place, maybe some misplaced emotion of some sort. Sorry, I just feel that it needs improvement of some sort.
    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    You did an amazing job here in this piece. strong emotions and very powerful. it gave me a good imagine in my mind. it was dark indeed. n i loved it. i love how you ended it. amazing job i shall say again. plz do keep it up!!
    forsure 5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    This poem is absolutely beautiful. Your word choice is amazing. I think it is so greatly written and it flows so well. This is an awesome poem. I really have no criticisms. It seems very delicate and soft with the words that are used. Everything glows so great and is so beautiful its a great masterpiece!!!

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