March-ing Orders

by Suicidal Love   Apr 23, 2009


Winter's been sacked,
It seems he left the sun on all day,
He was quite useless really -
No wind, and only half a day of snow!

Winter's been sacked,
It seems he let the daffodils out early,
And what's with the nice warm weather I wonder?
I can't see why we hired him in the first place now.

Winter's been sacked,
It seems he didn't like spring much,
So his work was not his best.
It was definitely the right decision I think.

Winter's been sacked,
It seems spring does a much better job,
I'm not sure why we had winter in the first place.
Spring is certainly the better of the two.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this piece is very unique, and i really enjoyed ~ there is humor, beauty and a creative splash of words.... very nice !

  • 13 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    As I read this...I became more and more amused at the changing desciption of Winter. By the end I was laughing a bit, and the last stanza in my opinion was great. Perfect way to end a poem. Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is really cute :) i liked it

  • 14 years ago

    by flutterflies

    Your repetition of : Winter's been sacked is very effective. You can tell that it was written as a younger person. The sentence structure shows it, although you wrote much better then I did.

    It is quite a cute poem and I love the personification you put behind it.

    ~Ally

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