Gold and Green

by Suicidal Love   Aug 9, 2008


No reply when I call
You scare me
Are you safe at home
Tucked up in your bed?
Or out on the pull
Like the old days?

'Paint the town red'
You'd say, 'no scrap that',
It made me laugh,
'Paint it gold and green
And so many more'
We'd chant in unison

The old days were the best
Laughing and screaming in the park
Road trips that took forever
Blaring our songs out to the world
Singing along like there's no one to hear
Out of tune every time

But now you're different
Or maybe its me
There's no longer laughing
Or singing to the world
Times change, as did we
For theres no answer when I call

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Rocky

    I liked how ths poem reflected the happiness when we where younger. how the world seemed a better pplace. but then we loose as we grow older. so sad but true

  • 10 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow.... this was such an excellent poem. It's very well done I absolutely love it! Amazing. It has a very good flow, and it's written very well. It also has a great story! Absolutely wonderfu!! I don't think there are any down-sides to this. 5/5

    Soda.

  • 10 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I don't see this as a family or friends poem, more of a sad or dark poem, but still good enough. 5/5 from the PoetryKnight
    aka
    Aaron

  • 10 years ago

    by heartbrokengrl

    Wow this is really really good

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem has a great flow and I really enjoyed the style it was written in, each stanza is very well written and theoverall poem is perfectly suited to the heading of the poem =] Really great job!