Some Day...

by Suicidal Love   Jun 2, 2008


She sat there in her corner
So quiet, so alone
She hoped no-one would find her
In this place that she called home

This girl of barely seven
Had nothing of her own
No little toys to play with
She just sat there quite alone

She made no noise, not ever
On fear of being caught
Sound would never pass her lips
For that's what she'd been taught

You see, her daddy used to be there
Until that dreadful day
The day the bad men found him
The day that daddy went away

So now the girl just sits there
She slowly wastes away
Waiting for her daddy
For he'll come back some day

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is amazing and so emotional and it is just beautifully written. Keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    This is a poem that just grabs your attention! its amazing. keep up the good work wow 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Excellent write...saddening and powerful 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    AWW :( :(
    AMAZING :) :)
    i dont know if i should cry or if i should be happy that u made something so0o0o0o amazing.
    5outa5 :)
    **Bri

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Omg .. That was SAD . Usually , I break down poems , and point out their weak points .. But I can't do that with this one , neither can i give you any pointers . It's fantastic . The only little thing that kind of bothered me is that the rhyme sound is the same in the first two stanzas . Try to switch it up maybe ? 5/5

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