A Place Called Heaven

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 4, 2009


This poem came to mind today, and just thought I'd submit it :) It's the first poem I wrote as a child when I was 12 or so, and just thought I'd submit it for fun! and because it's special to me :)

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There's a place called heaven far far away,
A land full of glory and peace,
A place where I hope to be someday,
A place full of glory and peace.

The ladder's are appearing,
The gate's are opening wide,
Angel's are singing in my ear's
And God's close by my side.

He puts His arms around me,
He say's my child come in...
You're sins have been forgiven,
And you may enter in.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What a great write. It amazes me that you wrote this at 12, it is very well done. Not much more to say on this one. :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin what a beautiful poem of Faith :) Thanks for sharing this with us :)
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    I think it is everyone's mission in life to end up going to heaven. i thought that the poem was great and the imagery created was very nice, keep up the nice work

    Kerry Gardiner

  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Its great to have a God that forgives. Great job on this poem i love it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is special and for a child of 12 it was well written. God does forgive our sins and accepts us. Your words describing heaven fit my thoughts as to how it will be. Well done.

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