Sitting Here... (Lento)

by Dreamofolwin   Aug 14, 2009


Sitting here, watching the world go by.
Hitting this bottle again tonight.
Sipping its venom, till it runs dry.
Belittling this poison and its plight.

Numb, my heart hears church bells chime.
Come they say, and you will see.
Some inner voice say's "It is time...
Succumb, and let me satisfy thee."

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Redemption, what a wonderful way for it to be described. You never let us down. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a great write with a great message, the way I see it is this person sins then confesses and realize they have done the wrong thing. By letting the world pass them by and making the bad decision. Anyways .. you did great with this, it holds meaning and a message for all to read. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As I read it I felt like a soul is lost & is been
    called towards a light of hope..a touching
    read..take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Lento seems to be this weeks fad and this is the best of the ones I have read to date an excellent effort which was simple direct and painted vivid stark images of hopelessness then perhaps something better. An excellent Lento worth a 5/5 Ray S

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This is another winner. Your words are like the daily truth, a recall of inspiration. really well worded with a nice flow,Good job Olwin as always
    Jimmy

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