Fluttering high

by Lonely Rider   Aug 21, 2009


..........A day..................Our day.....
....I |to celebrate freedom, patronize
...n | the valor, not through words but
...d |............deed,each heart.............
...e |....................shine ....................
...p |.................with glory..................
...e | light with......every....hue mirrored
...n | across the...world , let us stand tall
...d |..........and salute this moment
...e |....................of pride
...n |
...c |
...e |
. ... |
...D |
...a |
...y |
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** Written on the occassion of our Independence Day , 15th Aug

I have customized Shape poetry :) hope you could make out the flag fluttering high :)

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  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    I totally got it was a flag! Well done, A wonderful salute to your country

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh yes! Great job in doing this. I can never
    do shape poetry & admire those who do it
    soooo perfectly! Excellent work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well, I took a good look at this and I was thinking, that if you were to make a straight line from top to finish using capital x's and then put the story in the flag, so to say, that then it would look even better, just a thought:)
    I think Independance is the greates good on earth and indeed should be celebrated. So many lost their lives for our freedom, they should be honored for all eternity:)

    A real fun poem, daring too:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You did do a good job. It is too bad that we cannot do the shape poetry without all the dots and dashes to hold the shape. Independence Day regardless of where you live, is a day to be celebrated and thanks given for being free. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very creative . I thought you did an excellent job

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