Warm Breezes...(Haiku)

by Dreamofolwin   Apr 11, 2010


Hazy sun up high
Warm breezes drift by my face
Tickling, pleasing me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautiful, you put us in this special moment just as if we were experiencing it ourselves. :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    This poem had great imagery and I could feel the breeze against my face as I read it. Good job with the form and Keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Olwin, you used a form (smiles). Loved this Haiku. I could see the sun and feel the breeze. Well done.