Silent Voices

An excellent poem

Deffintly deserved a win
5/5 from me(: x

Thought provoking piece, invites the reader to think and re-read, great job at capturing the reader's attention. And congrats on the win too :)

Raj
Another beautiful piece you have penned. Love the imagery and your word choices.
Congrats on a well deserved win!
Love Cindy

I love it! Love the images you created.

"Silent voices echo
in the corridors
of a solitary night,"
^
Yay! I could almost visualize this :) my fave stanza.

I think your opening and closure were the best parts, even though the whole poem deserves to be praised :)

Well done!
Shine on =)

Raj,

This was an interesting piece by you & if I hadn't of used my three nominations for this week, this piece would be at top of my list. I liked the length of this poem, it was inspiring... especially since I am trying to write a short verse for an exercise in RTVW.

I found your word choice to be quite beautiful, some of the metaphors were stunning.. The second stanza would have to be my favorite, it was eerie, & mysterious to me..

While the topic of being alone has been used quite a lot, this piece defined itself. It was elegant, and capturing. Definitly worth the read.. A favorite piece by you. Well done on writing such a lovely write.

-Mel.